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Returning to the Fold

It’s been several years since I have contributed to this blog. I started it during a period when I was writing lots of short stories and submitting them to publication through resources found on Duotrope. Like many people, I am an aspiring writer. I love creating stories, crafting characters, and building worlds. And while I feel vulnerable by saying so, I love to be read. I feel that my fiction shares certain aspects of my personality that may never be revealed otherwise. In fiction, I can reveal thoughts and philosophies that are more difficult to squeeze into daily conversation. I can delve into my fears and insecurities, tapping into my deepest, darkest thoughts, all while filtering them through a medium that is, for the most part, make-believe.

When I began this blog, I wanted it to be a forum from which I could share my fiction. I planned on discussing writing from time to time, but ultimately I wanted to create a tool to share and promote my work. Unfortunately, I couldn’t keep up with it, and after gathering a very modest group of readers, I fell off the grid. I still wrote, but I began focusing on longer works. Since I last contributed to this blog, I have completed many more short stories and finished drafting my first two novels. I’ve submitted one of those novels to a handful of promising agents, with the hope that one of them appreciates what I have done.

While I would like to keep this blog loosely wrapped around writing and fiction, I will also use it to discuss ideas and creative works of all kinds. If I feel so compelled, I may write a review for a movie, a book, or a video game. I may discuss my own techniques in writing, or I may discuss why I enjoy the works of others, and why I think they are successful writers.

Most importantly, I want to create a forum that reaches out to other writers and readers. I want to contribute to your work, read your blog, and become part of a community. If you have a short story you want to share, let me know. I’ll read it. If you want a critique, I can help you with that too.

Consider this the relaunch of a long-defunct blog that may have been a bit misguided from the start. I look forward to meeting each and every one of you, and I hope we can help each other become better writers.

Thanks for reading.


Eva and Seth

This is a fantasy short story about a brother and sister and their experiences with a crisis of faith.  I attempted to have it published, but didn’t have success.  Though the plot and pacing are imperfect, I do think that the story touches on some interesting themes that I will revisit in the future. 

Eva and Seth

Seth’s knees buckled and he collapsed like a shanty in a hurricane.  His bag of rice landed on its side, sending a cascade of grains across the dusty landscape. 

“Are you okay?”  Eva tugged at his shirt.  “You need to get up.  The Theran are watching.”

Seth watched the drops of sweat roll off his forehead and disappear in puffs of dust as they hit the ground.  Sharp little pebbles prodded at his knees and he wondered if they’d made him bleed.  He dug his left foot into the ground and tried to lift his body.  It wouldn’t move. 

“You must get up.”  Eva pulled desperately at his arm.  It hurt, but Seth didn’t have the energy to protest.  “There are two nearby.  I can feel their eyes.”

Seth turned his head and saw one of the four-legged beasts grazing among a patch of tall grass.  It snorted, shaking a bug off its shoulders as it foraged for food.  It wasn’t watching him. 

Seth spit the dirt from his mouth and took a deep breath. Teeth grinding, he pushed off of the ground with both his palms and managed to get his feet under him.  The sudden change in position made him woozy, but Eva was there to hold him up.  “They’re not watching us, Eva.  They’re just animals.”

“Don’t say things like that.  I’d have thought your sickness would have taught you a lesson.”

Seth looked down at his fallen bag of rice.  He knew he wouldn’t be able to carry it. 

“Here, I might be able to take your bag for a little while.”  Eva balanced her own bag precariously on her knee while she reached for Seth’s with her free hand.  There was a time that Seth envied her strength.  As his illness became worse, he had needed it.

“This isn’t worth it.”  Seth’s voice cracked.  “I’m going to die before we get there.”

“Quiet you big baby.”  Eva’s eyes betrayed the smile on her lips.  “We’re almost there.  Then you’re going to get better, and we can go home and celebrate with Father.”

“Don’t talk to me about Father.  You could build him a castle and he’d thank the Theran for it.”

“You shouldn’t speak of him that way.”

Seth looked at the ground.  He dragged his feet, following Eva as quickly as his legs would allow.  She hauled both bags in her arms and still moved faster than him. 

“You’re doing fine.”  She readjusted her grip on the bags.

The walk ended with an uphill climb through a thick patch of brush to the top of the highest waterfall in the land.  Seth could feel the cool mist kissing his neck and he sighed, recalling the days that he used to travel here in the mornings and listen to the birds sing in the treetops.

When they approached the top of the waterfall, Eva handed him his bag of rice.  She smiled.  “I don’t think it will matter that you dropped some of it.  The Theran can’t punish you for an honest mistake.”

Seth looked over the edge of the cliff.  The water careened off the cluster of rocks below, shrouding the descent in whitish-blue mist.  He wondered what it would feel like to leap off.  To feel the wind blow through his hair for one last time.  Would the joyous days of his youth flash before him?

Eva leaned over and put her hand on his back.  “Go ahead.”

With his eyes closed, Seth curled his toes and took a deep breath.  He held the bag of rice out in front of him and poured it out into the waterfall.  He couldn’t hear it over the roaring of flowing water, but he imagined that it sounded like rain.

Eva dumped her bag out and took Seth’s empty sack.  She smiled.  “It’s done.  You’ll feel better now.  I promise.”

“I already do.”  Seth sighed and extended his arms. 

A smile broke out across his face and he inched closer to the edge of the waterfall.  The cool droplets of mist condensed across his neck and chest.

“It’s nice being up here.”  Eva smiled and folded her arms.  Seth didn’t move.  He stood with his head tilted towards the water.  “Hey, you alright?  We can go back now.”

Seth bent his knees and jumped down into the waterfall.  Eva reached out reflexively to catch him, brushing the fabric of his pants with her fingertips as he slipped by. 

“Seth!” She stepped up to the edge and threw down the empty sacks.  She swallowed and prepared to dive after him.  There was no other way down, but the rocks were too jagged and the water too shallow.  Seth’s body collided with one of the rocks and got tossed aside like a hailstone against a rooftop.  He disappeared under a cloud of mist. 

Eva’s knees weakened and she examined the water to find him.  She sat on the edge of the cliff, letting her feet dangle over the side.  She’d looked over the side a thousand times and had never seen a way to descend without falling.  But she looked again. 

For a hanging vine. 

For a path of rocks to leap down. 

For a magical ladder forged by the Theran.

There was nothing.  She watched the water pool up around the place where Seth fell.  No sign of him.

“Seth.  Why did you do this?”  She stood up and backed away from the edge of the waterfall.  Staring so far down made her dizzy.  Feeling the blood rushing into her face she clenched her fists and turned to the Theran.  “Why didn’t you stop this?  He did everything you asked of him and you let him jump.” 

The Theran ignored her.  Faces buried in the grass, they pretended not to hear.  She took a step forward.  “Was his sacrifice not good enough?  What more did you want from him?”

They remained quiet.  It wasn’t the first time they had ignored her.  Perhaps she should have been used to it.

Eva held her head and looked towards the sky.  Her legs were tired and the smell of the waterfall made her nauseous.  She thought about the words she would use to tell Father. 

As she began the walk back, she caught eye of the Theran standing around her.  Their vacant eyes seldom settled to meet hers.  They wandered like cattle from one patch of grass to the next, shifting their bulky bodies as minimally as they could.  For the first time they looked like animals.

Eva was startled to see the village when it appeared over the horizon.  Seth and the Theran had consumed her thoughts.  Until now she hadn’t noticed her tiring calves burning with every footstep. 

“Eva.  You’re back already?”

A familiar voice echoed through the woods.  Eva turned to see her friend Ella approaching with a bow slung over her back and a fox dangling by the tail from her hand.  She wore a smile far too jubilant for the circumstances.

“Where’s Seth?”  Ella looked around and then back at Eva.  The smile faded.  She lowered her arms and dropped the fox into the dirt.  “Something’s wrong.  Did the Theran refuse the sacrifice?”

“Refuse?  I don’t know what you mean.”

“Did the waterfall return the rice?”

Eva shook her head and scowled.  “Don’t be absurd.  Have you ever seen that happen?”

“No, but it happened in the ancient times.”

“It didn’t happen this time.”

“Then what’s the matter?  Where’s Seth?”

“He died.”  The words sputtered out before Eva could think to contain them.  The shock on Ella’s face made her regret saying anything.

“But…” Ella looked at the ground.  “You made the sacrifice and he still didn’t recover?  How is that possible?”

“Please.  Don’t make me talk about it.”  Eva felt her throat clenching up.  She wanted to run away.  “I need to talk to my father first.”

“Of course.”  Ella picked up her fox and brushed it off.  She looked tense and unsure how to react.  “Perhaps the Theran can still bring him back.”

“Perhaps.”  That wasn’t how it worked and Eva knew it.  She suspected that Ella knew it as well.  She turned away and jogged towards father’s hut until she sensed that nobody was behind her.  Father was outside crouched over the fire pit toasting thin strips of venison.  Seth’s favorite.  She could hardly stomach the smell.

“Father, we have to talk.”

The old man stood up and brushed the silvery long hair away from his face.  His lips trembled.  “Seth isn’t with you.”

A light breeze blew the smoke from the fire into Eva’s eyes.  The hot sting sent a single tear down her cheek.  “I couldn’t save him.  The Theran…”

“The Theran didn’t save him?  What of the sacrifice?  All that rice.”

“The sacrifice went fine.  He…”  Eva felt another tear tickle her cheek.  She sniffled.  “He jumped off the waterfall.  It wasn’t the illness that got him.  He just spread his arms and… jumped.”

“Idiot.”  Father threw the venison into the heart of the fire and kicked at the flaming logs with a bare foot.  The meat shriveled into ashes.  “Had he no regard for his soul?”

“Father, stop.”  The smoke poured into Eva’s face.  She coughed and stepped back.  “The Theran have no reason to punish him further.”

“You know so little.”  Eva’s father didn’t seem to notice the burn on his shin. 

“Why would you say something like that?”

“Our oldest records state that anyone who takes their own life is doomed to wander the planet forever as a lost soul.  The Theran themselves decreed it.”

“Well, maybe Seth didn’t believe that.”  Eva wondered if she spoke for Seth or for herself.  “He never believed that the Theran were anything but animals.”

The muscles in Father’s neck tightened and contorted.  His face grew as red as the evening sun.  “Then he got what he deserved.  I am ashamed to call him my son.”

Eva watched her father shuffle back to the hut.  He stopped at the doorway and lowered his head.  “Two weeks of rice.  Gone for nothing.”

He disappeared inside.  Eva watched the fire fade into dying coals.  She laid in the dirt and looked up at the sky.  The stars came out one by one.  People passed by.  They stared at her, murmuring to each other but saying nothing to her.  With all thoughts with her brother, Eva closed her eyes and slept. 


“Get off the ground, girl.” 

Eva stumbled to her feet.  The early sun blinded her and tickled her nose.  She forgot for a moment why she was outside.  Her father stood above her, dressed in his white ceremonial gowns of mourning.


“Look at you.”  Eva’s father pulled out her sleeve with his fingertips and examined it.  “Filthy.  What were you thinking?”

“I was tired.  I must have accidentally dozed off.”

“That’s no excuse for laying in the dirt like a swine.  Cleanliness is one of our most important virtues.”

Eva lowered her head.  “I’m sorry.”

“It’s a wonder you haven’t contracted Seth’s illness.  You should be on your knees thanking the Theran.”

The Theran.  The same creatures who would punish Seth after all his sacrifice and hardship.  If Seth’s soul was to wander around lost for the rest of time, then Eva couldn’t expect better  She swallowed and looked up at her father.  “I owe nothing to the Theran.”

The old man looked at her with stony eyes.  He lifted his hand and struck Eva’s face harder than she thought possible.  Her teeth chattered and she reached for her cheek.  The sting brought tears to her eyes.  When she looked back up, Father had already started off towards the falls. 

A few other villagers followed him in their own white garments.  Eva rubbed her face and wondered if she was even welcome to follow.  With Father gone, she ducked into the hut and looked upon her own ceremonial gown.  It hung against the wall right next to her bed to remind her of lost friends.  She ran her fingers over the soft velvety fabric and up to the copper crest on the left sleeve.   

Cool and smooth. 

A big brown eyesore on an otherwise fine gown.  It meant ‘Praises to the Theran.’  The phrase no longer held any significance.  She put her palm over the top and tore it off in one motion.  She smiled, surprised by the ease of its removal.  Turning away from the gown, Eva saw her bow and quiver propped against the wall next to her bed.  She picked them up and left the hut.

Ella and Victor approached in their own white clothes.  Ella smiled weakly.  “I’m so sorry.”

Victor shook his head.  “Are you sure he didn’t fall on accident?  I just can’t believe Seth would do something like that.”

“I guess my father has already told everyone.”  Eva gripped the limb of her bow.  

“Where’s your gown?” Ella asked.  “Your father will be furious if you’re late to the funeral.”

“I’m not going.”  Eva braced herself for the reaction.

“Come on.”  Ella delicately put her hand on Eva’s shoulder.  “I’d be mad too if my brother defied the Theran, but this is the last time you’ll get to pay your respects.”

Eva threw Ella’s hand off.  “You don’t understand at all.  Neither of you get it.”

“What’s the matter with you?”  Victor stepped forward.

“Follow me.”  Eva gestured towards a small grove of trees nearby.  She cupped her hands to her mouth and looked out across the village.  “Everyone who loves the Theran, follow me.” 

Victor and Ella protested, but since they kept following, Eva ignored them.  She marched towards the grove of trees, itching to lift the bow off her back.  She could sense a few other villagers following close behind.  She felt powerful.  Powerful enough to prove her brother right about everything. 

“There’s one right there.”  Eva stopped before the grove and took aim with her bow.  One of the Theran stood not a stones throw away, shading itself underneath a big oak tree.

“What are you doing?”  Desperation flooded Ella’s voice.  “You’re going to doom the entire village.”

“I want to prove something.”  Eva pulled back the drawstring.  The beast before her rested its head in a patch of grass and stretched out with its two front legs. 

Eva didn’t know if she could do it.  The protests from the crowd blended into a blur of white noise.  Her arm became shaky and she strained to keep focus.  Suddenly a hand bumped her elbow and she felt Victor breathing on her neck. 

She panicked.

The arrow soared through the air and hit the animal between the shoulder blades.  The Theran bucked up and let out a scream that echoed through the forest.  The beast shook from side to side, trying vainly to loose the arrow.  The screaming became louder while the beast thumped its hooves against the ground creating a great cloud of dust.

With a shaky hand, Eva loaded another arrow.  She aimed carefully and fired.  It struck the Theran in the neck.  The mighty animal’s legs shook for a moment and it fell to the earth.  It dug its hooves into the dirt, struggling to move.  Its lower body caked with dirt, it inched along towards the grass.  Too weak in the knees to rise back up. 

Its screams slowed and gave way to delicate whimpers.  Eva held her forehead and watched its lungs rhythmically expand. 

In and out.  In and out.  She could hear every labored breath, but it still wasn’t dying.

Eva sighed and approached the animal, dragging her feet as she got closer.  It raised its head once to look at her, its fur soaked in blood.  It didn’t know her.  It didn’t even know she had done this.  It whimpered one last time as if asking for help.  Eva closed her eyes and loaded one more arrow. 

She let it go.

Noise in the forest ceased for a moment.  Aside from a distant breeze whistling passed the branches, all fell silent.  Eva watched the wind blow through the animal’s fur.

“Why did you do that?”  Ella asked. 

“I don’t know.”

“I don’t understand,” Victor said.  “Why didn’t it stop you?  The Theran are supposed to be all powerful.  Was it just an animal?”

“Yeah.  It’s just an animal.”  Eva returned the bow to her back and turned around.  “Just a peaceful animal.  And I knew that.  But for some reason I had to kill it.”

Ella shook her head.  Her eyes were red and her lips quivered.  “This doesn’t bring Seth back.  If anything it means he’s gone forever.  It means everything we ever believed was a lie.”

“Or maybe it doesn’t mean anything.”  Eva sighed.  “I don’t know where Seth is.  And I don’t know why he left me the way he did.  But I still hope to see him again.”

“We can’t let anybody else see this.”  Ella grabbed the fallen theran by the back legs and began pulling it away from the village.  “Your father would lose his mind.” 

“Yeah.  He probably would.” 

Eva returned the bow and arrows to her hut and draped the white gown over her clothes.  Her father would punish her for being late, but nothing he could do would match the emptiness she felt. 

As she began the long march, she whispered to herself.  “Maybe someday I’ll see Seth again.”

Life in an Anthill

I wrote this story about a year and a half ago.  It was my first legitimate attempt at using first-person perspective, and to date, the only story I’ve written that wouldn’t be classified as “genre fiction.”  

I’ve had trouble marketing this story, but despite its shortcomings, I’m happy with the attempt, and I believe that I did a number of things right, even if it ultimately falls flat at certain points.   One editor in particular expressed some very kind words about the story.  They understood exactly what I was trying to say and do, and that proved to me that this story does have value, even if it’s not for everyone.  I will continue posting one story a day for the next few days, culminating with a fantasy piece that my wife thinks is of professional quality.  I hope you enjoy this, and as always, I appreciate the interest in my work.


Life in an Ant Hill

I felt a lump in my throat the size of Wisconsin as I pulled up to the parking space.  Gilbert’s white Mazda sat in the spot I usually took right in front of the door.  I parked nearby in my little green fiat. 

When I opened the car door an old geography textbook fell onto the pavement.  It was stained with sticky cola and bits of napkin, so I picked it up carefully with my thumb and index finger.  The big blue globe on the cover stared back at me and I frowned.  No matter how many different people, countries and cultures I could pick out on the map, nothing outside the pinprick representing Vallejo, California meant a damn thing in my life.  I tossed the book into the trashcan.   

I hated college almost as much as the salty smell of french fries and cooking oil.  The same aroma that made me hungry as a high school freshman now smelled like a three-hundred dollar paycheck and Monday-Tuesday weekends. 

I looked at the clock on my cell phone and realized I could be nineteen minutes late if I hurried.  Since that sounded better than twenty I butted the door open with my shoulder and walked in.

Susie was the first person I saw, but she seemed even more repelled by my presence than usual.  She wore glasses thick enough to spot Pluto on a cloudy night, but that didn’t stop her from squinting up at the order screen to avoid eye contact.  “Hey Greg, don’t clock in.  Gilbert wants to see you in his office.”

Don’t clock in.  Three terrible words that I’d become familiar with in my few working years.  I gritted my teeth and tried to brush the chip crumbs off my uniform.  They stayed stuck in the cotton mesh and wouldn’t budge.  I shook my head and marched to the back.  I prepared a phony grin and opened the door.  Gilbert looked up from his game of Minesweeper and motioned to the chair in front of his desk.  “Sit down, Greg.”

I sat and looked up at Gilbert’s chin.  My chair sunk down like it was pitted in quicksand and I felt like a child sitting at the adult dinner table for the first time.  Gilbert switched off his monitor and lounged back with his fingers intertwined.  “I thought I talked to you about coming in late like this.”

“I’m sorry sir.” I couldn’t tell if I was being sarcastic or not.  “I don’t have any excuses, but I promise that it won’t happen again.”

“That’s not good enough.  We need reliable employees who want to be here.” 

I turned away and tried to imagine the neanderthal who would enjoy coming in and flipping burgers for a living.  “I do enjoy being here and I’m a hard worker.  I’m good with the customers.  You know how hard it is to get people who stick around here.  I’ve been working for a couple months and four or five people have quit since then.”

“I know, but I’ve given you too many chances as it is.  I can’t stand around waiting for you to start caring.  You don’t keep your uniform clean.  You don’t shave regularly.”

“Well, maybe if you’re basing all that on today, but-“

“I’m sorry Greg.  I think you’re a good guy, but I’m going to have to let you go.”  The words grabbed my heart and I felt my jaw go limp. 

“Okay.”  It was all I could think to say.  I looked into the eyes of the junior college student who had just ended my career and I turned around.  I left the room with my body numb to the activity all around me.  The boisterous sounds of the restaurant blended together like the white noise of a waterfall rushing in the distance.  By the time I started my ignition, I already felt a little better.  At least I wouldn’t have to go to work for a while.

I tried blasting the radio, but the songs were all too crappy and mainstream so I turned it off and sang an old Offspring song about road rage.  I planned my entire day out in my head. A quick call to my friend Justin followed by leftover pizza and a limitless Halo 3 play session.  That was it.  By the time I got to my apartment and threw my body onto the couch I felt absolutely liberated.  I dialed Justin’s number.

“Hey, what are you calling me so early for?” he sounded groggy and hung over. 

“It’s almost eleven.”  I smiled and switched the phone to my other ear.  “Did you have a late night?”

“I went to bed around six.  What’s going on?”

“It’s time to celebrate.”  I raised my voice and feigned excitement.  “Gilbert surprised me with an early retirement today.”

“Dude, I’m too tired for the stupid word play.  Are you saying you got fired?” 

“Yeah.  You wanna hang out?”

“I’d rather sleep.”  After a long silence I could hear Justin’s labored breathing on the other end.  It resembled snoring and I wondered if I should shout into the earpiece.  “Give me a minute to get ready.  I’ll meet you at the little cafe next to my house.”

I frowned and thought about the Saturday crowds strutting in with their laptops and turtlenecks.  “Can we do the comic book store?  I’m less intimidated by nerds and low lighting.”

“If I’m going to be up right now, it’s gotta be either the café or that coffee shop you hate.”

“Café it is.  I’ll meet you there.”  I hung up and searched around the apartment for something decent to wear.  Most of my clothes were lying in piles and I couldn’t really tell what was clean.  I sniffed a black Metallica shirt.  Nothing but stale deodorant with a hint of cheap cologne.  I threw it on along with a pair of sunglasses and a beanie. 

The cafe was only a couple blocks away, but one glance down the sidewalk and I knew I had to drive.  A middle aged hipster and his idiot dog blocked off the entire sidewalk and I wasn’t interested in conspicuously stepping around them through the dewy grass. 

The drive wasn’t long and Justin was already sitting in the corner.  I avoided eye contact with the girl at the front but she called to me anyway.

“Hey, how’s it going today?”  Her overly bubbly greeting drilled itself into my skull and I turned my head towards her Siren call.  Long blond hair and a smile so sickeningly sweet that I expected to see strawberry syrup pouring out her ears. 

“Good.  Just here to meet a friend.”  I walked away too quickly for her to respond and then scooted into the booth across from Justin.  “You got here quick.”

“I had to rush to keep from falling back asleep.  So what happened?”

I shrugged and started fidgeting with one of the sugar packets on the table.  “I don’t know.  I got there late one too many times I guess.”

“How are you going to pay your rent?”  Justin took another sip and looked up with bloodshot eyes.  I detected a hint of schadenfreude in his voice. 

“Rent’s going to be tough.  I should probably find another job.”

“Well, you could always move back in with your parents.  It sucks, but it’s kept me from working.”

“I’m not moving in with my parents.”  I chuckled and tore the sugar packet open.  “I could probably tolerate it, but they’d be miserable.  I bet when they find out I got fired they’ll offer to pay my rent for me just to avoid the possibility.”

“They’d do that?”

I shrugged and poured the sugar into my mouth.  “Probably.  They have money.”

“Man, I’m so jealous of you.”  Justin finished off his coffee and stood up to get another.  “My parents are close to broke, but even if they had money I don’t think they’d just give it to me.  Damn.  Just thinking about sitting around and doing nothing.  That’s pretty much the dream life.” 

As Justin got back in line to grab another coffee his last sentence stuck with me.  I felt haunted by the realization that what he said was true.  The best existence I could hope for would be sitting around playing video games while simultaneously avoiding human interaction.  I rested my head on the table until Justin got back with his beverage.

“So you never really had any ambition to do anything?” I asked.

“What, for work?” Justin sat down and blew on his coffee.  He looked a bit puzzled.

“Yeah.  I mean you can’t live with your parents forever.”

“I kind of wanted to get into business for a while but I changed my mind when I started taking classes.  At this point I think my best chance is winning the lottery.” 

“It’s just weird,” I said.  I looked down at the table wishing I had my own mug as a distraction.  “We were both okay students in high school.  What happened?”

“I don’t think about it too much.  I’ll get myself together and go back to school eventually.  Things will fall into place.” 

I shook my head and thumbed through the remaining sugar packets.  “I don’t think so.  I used to want to go to Africa and join one of those humanitarian programs.  I failed one cultural geography class before I realized that I kind of hate people and would be better off spending my time drinking beer and watching football.”

“Sort of a religious awakening for you, huh?”

I began wondering why I’d agreed to meet here.  I looked around for a quieter place to sit, but a man in the back of the kitchen immediately caught my eye.  He couldn’t have been a day younger than sixty and he was gripping a mop and working harder than I had at my very best.  It didn’t even seem to bother him that he was surrounded by privileged little yuppie kids only working to supplement their five-hundred dollar allowances.

“Why is that guy doing this?” I asked as I watched him.

“I don’t know.  Everybody needs to work.”

I nodded.  “Yeah, but isn’t there a point that you just give up?  I don’t understand the drive to keep going for this guy.  Why is he putting that much effort into such a meaningless task?  This guy is at the back end of his life and yet he keeps going, just existing because he can.  His entire legacy will be that he was a janitor for this crappy little cafe.”

 “He’s probably got family to take care of.  My dad never made much money but he still worked hard because of me and my mom.  That’s just life man.”

I ignored the fact that the dude who’d never worked a day in his life was lecturing me about responsibility.  With my eyes glued to the janitor I tried to convince myself that people have to make their own meanings in life and that it was all good for the species.  The more I watched though the less I bought it. 

Justin reached around his back like there was a spider loose in his shirt.  “Hold on a second.  I’ve got a call.” 

I flashed back to my days in school and wondered if I could do it again.  I remembered my professor’s meticulously trimmed goatee and his bottle of Vitamin Water far better than the lessons.  The other students would always raise their hands to discuss topics that they knew little about.  As stupid as high school students but twice as opinionated.  No, I wasn’t going to go back to that. 

I turned to Justin but he was still on the phone.  He had a sour look on his face as he plugged one ear and zoned in on the phone conversation.  I decided to head to the bathroom read any new graffiti in the stalls.  It would be healthy to get my daily dose of reading. 

Before I scooted all the way out of the booth, Justin stood up and turned his phone off.  “I’ve gotta go.  My dad’s in the hospital.  It sounds like he had a stroke.” 

I nodded but I couldn’t think of the right courtesy response.  I bit my tongue when I saw a tear rolling down Justin’s face.  It was barely distinguishable but in his case it may as well have been a tsunami.  I swallowed and picked my brain for a response.  “I’m sorry.  Do you need a ride?”

Justin shook his head.  “Nah, the bus goes right by here.”

“Yeah.”  I held my hand to my chin.  That sounded reasonable enough and it meant I wouldn’t have to do anything.  I started to turn around but I remembered the stale smell of body odor that always permeated the public buses.  Not to mention the clientele. I sighed.  “Well, I’ve got nothing to do.  Do you want a ride maybe?”

Justin sniffled and nodded.  “Okay.  If you’re sure.”

“Yeah.  I need to get out of here anyway.” I shuffled for my keys secretly hoping that I wouldn’t find them.  I led Justin out to my car while wondering how much gas this would cost me and where I would find a parking space.  The silence during the car ride was as awkward and excruciating as a Carrot Top concert and I found myself working hard to keep from whistling.

We got to the hospital and the nurse directed us to Justin’s father’s room.  His mom was already there, looking into the old man’s eyes while she held his hand and whispered to him.  I recited movie dialogue in my head to keep from hearing her and I looked up at the television.  Nascar.  All things considered I was willing to give it a chance.  I saw Justin hugging his mother out of the corner of my eye and I wondered if I’d be safe to leave. 

“You don’t have to stay,” Justin said.  “My mom can give me a ride.”

I nodded and swallowed.  “Okay, I’ll see you later.”

I felt a small measure of relief knowing that I could go home, but my eyes wandered to Justin’s father and my legs stopped dead as if cemented to the ground.  He wasn’t that old.  Just a twinkle in his eye away from fishing with his buddies.  I could see my own father in his withering eyes.  I could see myself.  I’m not sure why I did it, but I walked up to Justin and stood next to him.

“He’s done a lot for us,” Justin said.  “I don’t know how we’re going to pay all the medical bills.” 

The tears ran down his Justin’s face freely and I couldn’t help but feel like an asshole.  Justin’s father was just like the old janitor.  A man who worked hard for his family but had nothing to show for it.  I felt bad for being so critical when I had accomplished so little in my own life.  Less than either of them.  I stepped back and turned towards the door.

“You heading out?” Justin asked.

“Yeah, as long as you don’t need anything.  I hope your dad gets better.”

I grabbed the doorknob but I didn’t feel right leaving.  Justin turned to his mother.  “I’m sorry that I’ve waited so long to start looking for work.  I’ll get a job to help pay for everything.”

“That would really help the family,” Justin’s mother said.  “It’s going to be difficult for a while.”

It was weird to see Justin vulnerable and even weirder to see him caring about something.  I felt a knot forming in my throat.  “Do you maybe want to start taking classes with me?  I can look some up online.  It might be easier if we’re both in it together.”

Justin turned to me with his head down low.  “I don’t think I can afford it right now.  I just want to spend some time with my dad and then maybe we can take classes next summer.  I need to work everything out in my head.”

I nodded and looked down at the father.  I think he could see me too, and I know he could feel his family beside him.  I didn’t really know what to say so I waved awkwardly and left the room. 

By the time I got back to my car I already felt a little better.  If I wanted, I could go home and play video games until my eyes glazed over and I started attracting flies.  Somehow it just didn’t feel right. Every time something bad happened I found a way to escape.  Maybe it was time to stop being so passive and cynical.  The new semester of school was set to start and if I hurried I could go register for classes.  I put my foot on the gas and began the drive towards the registration office.  Life is too short to wish away.     


A Devil with a Halo

Thank you for joining me at my new blog at WordPress.  After several months of writing and polishing my craft, I’ve decided that the time is right for me to begin sharing select pieces of my work for free on the internet.  The stories and articles that I will be publishing here are exclusive to this blog, and hopefully, they will continue to evolve and prove enjoyable.  This is a story I finished about a year ago.  I hope you enjoy it!


A Devil with a Halo

“We shouldn’t be here.”  Carth pulled his hood over his ears and stopped in the middle of the road.  People from the streets had gathered around the little brown house, trying to see through the windows on the tips of their toes.  Like the healers, they had followed the sound of screaming.

“The hood will do little to hide your mark,” Twelve said.  He pointed to the white band tattooed across Carth’s eyes.  “If anything it makes you look more guilty.”

“Let’s leave then.  People don’t understand us.  It could turn violent.”

“It could.”  Twelve turned from Carth and walked towards the house.  The screams of anguish grew in volume and urgency.  He quickened his stride and placed a clasped fist against the door.  He knocked twice and grabbed the door handle.

“Who are you?”  An unfamiliar voice from behind.  If Twelve turned around they would see his mark for sure.  He swung the door open and took a step inside.

“I know that mark.  You’re one of those veiled killers.”  Twelve lowered his head.  There was no time to address this.

“That’s not true,” Carth said.  “We’re called Veiled Healers.”

Twelve turned around and grabbed Carth by the wrist.  He pulled him inside and slammed the door behind them.  He opened his mouth for a reprimand, but a wail from the next room brought him back to the present. 

The house stunk of sweat and sour milk.  Twelve lead the way down a hallway too narrow to traverse with a normal stride.  The house was sparsely decorated and a shadow painted every floorboard. 

Twelve pushed open the door to a tiny room.  Inside a young woman laid on her back; her naked legs dangling over the side of a filthy feather mattress.  Glossy trails of sweat rolled down her thighs and her limbs shook with chills.  A man with his palms clasped against her hand turned and gasped.  He hadn’t heard the two strangers come in.

“She’s in labor,” Twelve said.  “But something is wrong.”

“I sent for a doctor,” the man said.  “You aren’t doctors.  I know that mark on your heads.  You’re those…”

“Yes, we’re Veiled Healers.”  Twelve pulled the white gloves from his pouch and began to put them on.  “This is what we do.”

“Get out of my house.”  The heat behind his words sizzled the air.  “No killer is going to lay a hand on my wife.”

“We’re not killers anymore.”  Carth swallowed and stepped next to Twelve.  “We don’t even remember our own crimes.”

“So what?  You think that changes what you did?”  The man’s hands clamped hard around his wife’s palm.  “Get out.”

“Enough.”  Twelve burst forward and pulled the man up by the collar.  He shoved him against the wall so hard he could hear his teeth rattle.  “If you don’t stay out of our way, I promise you, your wife is going to die.  Your baby too.”

The man slid down the wall into a sitting position.  Though he made no effort to move, and icy expression clung to his face like a leech.  Twelve squatted over the woman and felt her forehead with his wrist.  He cursed under his breath and turned to Carth.  “She’s hot.”

“Do what you can,” Carth said.  He positioned himself for delivery and wiped his brow.  “The baby is coming.” 

With both of his hands on the woman’s head, Twelve whispered his mantra.  The energy flowed from his chest, down his arms, and out through his palms.  She was so hot he could feel droplets of sweat pushing through his own forehead.  He began to feel dizzy when he noticed that her wailing had changed.  Though it still carried the pain and burden of the world, it no longer had the sadness.

“That’s it,” Carth said.  “Keep pushing.”

Twelve spoke his mantra again, massaging the woman’s forehead with the tips of his fingers.  He could feel the muscles in her head begin to cool.  The shaking in her limbs slowed down and her breathing steadied.

“It’s a girl,” Carth said.  He smiled and lifted a slimy little red body over his head.

The wailing turned relieved breathing and a delicate smile crept onto the face of the new mother.  Twelve exhaled and stood up.  Carth stood beside him with the baby.  “Meet your new baby girl.”

The mother reached out with yearning arms, but she brought them back empty.   Her husband snatched the baby away with a ravenous grab.  “You did what you came to do, now get out.”

“She came close to dying,” Carth said.  “She still needs attention.”

The man shuffled back, one arm wrapped awkwardly around the baby’s chest as if he was hoarding a trophy.  “Leave now or I’ll do what the law should have done to you long ago.”

“It’s okay,” Twelve said.  He gave Carth a pat on the shoulder.  “Let’s just go.”

Carth held out his arms defensively.  “Give us another minute.”

His baby still hooked in one arm, the man pulled a dinner knife off the bedside table and lunged at Carth.  The blade sliced through cloth and caught Carth on the side of the ribs.  He pulled the knife loose and waved it towards the door.  “Out.  Both of you.”

Carth cursed and grabbed at the wound while Twelve wrapped his arm around the smaller man’s shoulders for support.  “Come on.  You’re going to be fine.”

They left the house with Twelve pulling Carth along on his shoulder.  The same crowd of people watched them intently, parting slowly to let them pass by.  Some were nervous, but most simply enjoyed the spectacle of seeing the healers in person.  Twelve felt relieved that none found the courage to try and kill him.  The two left site of the crowd and walked briskly until Twelve no longer felt any eyes upon him. 

“Let me take a look at your wound.”

“Why do they still hate us?”  Carth opened his shirt and grimaced as he peeled cloth away from the cut.  “Even after all that we’ve done for them, they still hate us.”

“They don’t have the luxury of forgetting.”  Twelve placed his palms around the wound.  It wasn’t too deep.  More messy than dangerous.  “You and I are murderers, and no amount of forgetting can change that.  These people view the veil as a free ride rather than a punishment.  Sometimes I agree with them.”

“I don’t remember killing anyone.  All I remember doing is dedicating my life to helping others.  Doesn’t that mean anything?”

“Perhaps.”  Twelve paused to remember the words of his mantra as he ran his fingers along the wound.  “But even if we’re entirely different people now, there are some that will always want us dead.”

“That’s already starting to feel better.  How long have you been a Veiled Healer?”

Twelve wondered if Carth was even listening.  “Fifteen years.”

“And they still haven’t given you back any memories?”

Twelve sighed as he finished with the wound.  He stood up and walked towards the monastery.  “Master Javen tells me that my crimes were so severe that it would be a risk to reveal anything about my history to me.  I have no wish to commit violence, nor any urge to do so.  If keeping me veiled is what it takes to maintain peace, then I am happy to walk this path for the rest of my life.”

“Fifteen years.  That means that whatever you did, you did it as a child.  You don’t want to know what happened?”

“No.”  Twelve pulled away from Carth and kept a step ahead of him until they reached the gates outside the monastery.  A tall iron fence surrounded the building and the men standing watch outside didn’t like the Veiled Healers any better than the rioters they kept away.  Their loyalty was on rent, and everyone within the walls knew it.  Twelve raised his head to show the mark across his eyes and passed through without so much as a nod.  He went to his quarters and prepared a plain pot of rice for lunch.

After an hour Twelve received word that Master Javen wanted to see him.  As he walked down the candlelit corridor to Javen’s chamber, Twelve came to realize that Carth’s words had imprinted themselves in his mind.  Fifteen years.  Fifteen years with no identity and no answers.  Longer than any other Veiled Healer in the history of the order.  He pushed his way through the big oak doors to Javen’s chamber.

“Thanks for coming Number Twelve.”  Twelve shielded his eyes from the light beaming through the window behind Javen.  The sun hung in the sky directly behind Javen’s head, casting a man shaped shadow across the room.

“It’s my honor to serve.”  Twelve bowed his head. 

“Fifty-Seven told me about your success today.  He also told me that you healed his wound on the journey back.”

“Fifty-Sev… oh, I suppose that’s Carth.”

“So he told you his name.”

“Yes, weeks ago.  I had nearly forgotten his number.”  Twelve tried not to sound coy.  “Most of the healers shed their numbers within days.”

Master Javen cleared his throat and stood up.  His beard nearly reached his waist and it moved whenever he did.  He pointed to a piece of parchment stretched out on the top of his table.  “I’ve been examining a record of your deeds since joining the Veiled Healers.  You’ve come a long way and have done some extraordinary things.  Some might say that you have served your purpose in saving so many lives.  They might say that you deserve to know why you are here.”

“And some might say that I’m a snake disguised as an angel.”

Master Javen nodded and stepped closer.  “Which do you believe?”

Twelve shuffled his feet.  He wished he could sense the answer that Master Javen wanted, but there was no reading a face that was shrouded in silhouette.  “I believe that it is impossible to stitch an invisible wound.  I have healed dozens if not hundreds of people.  But what does it matter if I have murdered thousands?  Until I know what I have done, I can never presume to be anything more than a snake.”

“You have not murdered thousands.”  Javen smiled weakly and came close enough that Twelve could smell the flowers woven into his beard.  “Today I wish to give you a gift that should have been yours long ago.”

“A window to my past?”  The urgency in Twelve’s own voice embarrassed him and he lowered his head. 

“Not yet,” Javen said.  “I’d like to teach you the highest technique among the healers.  It is sacred to the Masters and usually kept from the Veiled at all costs, but you are my brightest star.”

“What is it?”

“The ability to erase memory.  The ability to recruit the condemned to our cause and allow them to learn and grow under the same environment that you have.”

“That’s a huge responsibility.  If I were to use it on an innocent person…”

“I know that it’s a risk.  But I trust you.  As you know, each time I consider a Veiled Healer to be saved, I add a flower to my beard.  Today, I add one for you.”

Twelve sighed and peered down at the dozens of flowers poking through Master Javen’s whiskers.  Most had wilted with age and others had lost their petals.  He shook his head.  “I refuse to accept.”

Javen narrowed his eyes.  “How can you…?”

“Show me something from my past.  A word.  An image.  Something.  If you trust me, show me who I am.”

“Number Twelve, you are asking too much.  Even if I grant your request, I have no way of knowing what memories will return to you.”

“Then just give me my next assignment and I’ll be on my way.”

“Damn you.”  Javen stomped his foot and turned away.  “You have no idea what you ask of me.”

“Will you do it?”

“One image.”  Javen reached out with his hands and placed them above Twelve’s eyes.  “Promise me that you’ll still accept.  No matter what you see.”

“I promise.”

Master Javen closed his eyes and Twelve followed.  Javen whispered an unfamiliar mantra for a moment until Twelve found himself in a state of alternate consciousness.  It was like a dream, but lucid and without the illusion of control.  He saw himself standing in a small home with the sour scent of death grabbing him by the throat so firmly that he couldn’t breathe.  He held a wooden club in his right hand.  His grip was so tight that he could feel the sting of splinters gouging into the flesh of his palm.  Before him there lay two dead bodies.  His mother and his father. 

“Awake.”  Javen clapped his hands in front of Twelve’s nose.  Twelve opened his eyes and took a deep inhale of air.  “Now I don’t know what you saw, but that’s all you get for now.”

“I understand.”

“So we still have a deal?”

Twelve nodded and looked Javen in the eyes.  “Yes, of course.”

The following hours proceeded slowly with a series of chants followed by meditation exercises and mental conditioning.  Though Master Javen showered Twelve with praise at his aptitude for learning, the affection in the words only shamed him.  By the time he returned to his quarters, Twelve felt dirty for being alive.  He went to sleep that night wondering if he could use the new technique to remove his own memory again. 

“Wake up, Twelve.”  Twelve opened his eyes to see Carth’s smiling face hovering over his mattress.  “You slept through breakfast and it’s time to go.  Master Javen is taking us along to the jail.  Some young hoodlum killed the owner of one of the taverns.  The guards are turning him over to the Veiled Healers.”

Twelve sat up and stretched his arms.  “So we’re supposed to escort him back and break him into the order?”

Carth’s smile widened.  “Rumor has it that you’re the one who is going to erase his memory.”

“That’s some rumor.”

Carth laughed.  “Okay, I’ll admit it.  Master Javen has been telling everyone.  I can’t believe one of our own is finally getting to do this.  Isn’t it exciting?”

Twelve looked around for his cloak and started to dress.  “I was under the impression that my newfound power was meant as a secret.”

“I guess not.  Here, take this.”  Carth gave Twelve a short sword and sheathe with a white band around the hilt.  Twelve examined the base of the blade and gazed at his reflection.  It was his first time handling a weapon since becoming a healer, and yet it felt sickeningly natural.  “Master Javen is arming us as a precaution.  In case something goes wrong.”

“It’s wise to be safe,” Twelve said.  He finished dressing and went out to meet Master Javen.  The three departed after an exchange of pleasantries.  Twelve found himself clutching the hilt of the blade every time he thought about his vision. 

“We are going to go through the meadow,” Master Javen said as the men came within a mile of the jail.

“Isn’t that slower?” asked Carth. 

“Yes, but from here the road is too well travelled.  The chance of meeting people unfriendly to the healers is too great.”

Twelve followed Master Javen through the meadow while Carth lagged behind by a few paces.  The grass grew nearly chest high and with every step Twelve’s shoes sunk halfway into the ground.  The air was thick with pollen and Twelve could feel his eyes watering.  When the road was no longer in site, Javen stopped and turned around.

“Before we go on, there is something that needs to be done,” Javen said.  He spoke in a hollow tone as if his mouth was dry and he felt no confidence in his words. 

“Whatever you wish,” Twelve said.

“You need to understand precisely why you were chosen to join the Veiled Healers.”

“Here?  In front of Carth?”

“Close your eyes.”  Javen placed his hands on Twelve’s forehead.  Soon he found himself back inside that little house from his childhood.  Again he was holding the club, but this time chasing rats around a small kitchen table. 

“Rynn, you need to stop.”  He saw his father standing above his mother, grasping her forehead with the technique of the Veiled Healers.  “Go outside for a while.  She’s very sick.”

“She’s going to be just fine,” a man knelt down on the other side of Twelve’s mother.  He was a lean middle aged man with a heavy beard.  “A fever to be sure, but nothing I can’t fix.” 

“Do you need help?” Twelve asked his father.

“Not now, Rynn.  Go play outside.”

Twelve’s mother gasped and her limbs began to shake.  His father held her wrist.  “What’s happening now?”

“Nothing,” the bearded man said.  “I’m in control.” 

The woman writhed and began panting.  The panting grew loud and sorrowful, filled with despair unlike Twelve had ever heard. 

“Javen, you’re losing her.” 

“I’m not.  Give me time.”  The bearded man wrestled with his grip and chanted his mantra so loudly that it drowned out his Twelve’s mother’s screams.  With a heavy gasp she drew her final breath.  Her limbs fell flat and her head sunk deep into the pillow.

“Tana.  Tana, wake up.  Stay with me.”  Twelve’s father held his wife and brushed her forehead with his palm.  His eyes grew wet, and Twelve felt the sting of tears welling in  his own eyes.  He inched forward, knowing there was nothing he could do.

“She’s gone,” the bearded man said.  His tone was somber but abrupt.

“You promised you’d save her.”  Twelve’s father stood up.  His face was red and streaming with tears.  He shoved the bearded man so hard that the wall cracked. 

“I did my best.  Keep your hands off of me.”

“You’re a liar.  You’re a liar Javen.”  The bearded man reeled back as Twelve’s father connected a punch to his jaw.  He reached for a sword with the other hand and drew it out. 

“What, are you going to kill me?”  Twelve’s father forced a ghastly laugh.  “Go ahead.”  He lunged forward for another punch, but the bearded man moved to dodge.  He twisted his arm in such a manner that the sword jerked forth.  It stuck into Twelve’s father, cutting him deep below the breastbone.

The bearded man stepped back as Twelve’s father muttered an incomprehensible final word and fell on his back.  Twelve found himself staring down at his parents both mystified and terrified.  For a moment he couldn’t cry.  He turned to the bearded man. 

“Awake.”  Master Javen clapped his hands and Twelve found himself back in the present. 

“Th-that was you.  You killed my father.”

“I can’t apologize to you Rynn.  Nothing I say can ever change what I did.  I go to sleep every night wondering if my lunging forward with the blade was an accident or an act of malice.”  A tear rolled freely down Javen’s cheek.  “You aren’t a killer Rynn.  I abused my power.  I took your memory to protect myself.”

Carth stepped back and doubled over.  He grew pale and looked as if he might vomit.  Twelve couldn’t stand to look at Javen.  His hand danced around the hilt of his sword and he clasped it.

“That sword Carth gave you is the one I used that day.  If you need revenge for your parents, kill me with it.  Carth, you have my word that his actions will be justified.”

“No, don’t do it,” Carth said.  “The healers can’t kill anybody.  If you have to, just take his memory.  Everything is going to be okay.”

Twelve looked back and forth between Carth and Javen.  He’d spent the last fifteen years wondering if he’d deserved to die for whatever crimes he had committed.  And then he’d spent the last fifteen hours wondering if he should kill himself in the name of justice for his parents.  There was little doubt that if he had deserved it, Javen deserved far worse.  He drew his sword.

“Twelve,” Carth stood straight up and spoke with a quivering voice.  “Do you remember what you told me yesterday?”

“I don’t want to talk to you Carth.”

“You told me that people want us dead, even though we’re entirely different people now.”

“Fifteen years is a long time,” Twelve said.  “A man who deserved to die fifteen years ago may have earned himself a second chance.  But you betrayed me that whole time.  You kept me captive.”

“Yes.”  Javen nodded.  His eyes were red and glossy.  “You were always the best healer, and after a time I didn’t want to lose you.  I was afraid of hurting you with the truth.  When I gave you the knowledge to erase memories, I did so hoping that you would find it in your heart to replace me as Master.”

“I always knew the truth would hurt, but I never knew it would be like this.”  Twelve sheathed his sword.  “I’m not going to kill you Javen.  I’ve never been a killer.”

“Then you will take my memories.”


“No?  Why not?”

“If you are truly a changed man, then I don’t need to take your memories.  Learn to live with them as I now have to.  And serve the Veiled Healers as the first to never have his memory erased.  If I am to be the master, I mean to see to it that you are not the last.”

“I don’t even know what to say.”  Heavy tears ran down Javen’s cheeks, soaking through his beard.  “Thank you Rynn.”

“Follow me back to the monastery.  We have a lot of work to do.”